http://storyaday.org/knightwrite Just another Story A Day site Sat, 05 May 2012 20:13:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/04/the-visit/#comment-13 Summer Ross Sat, 05 May 2012 20:13:28 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=30#comment-13 I could feel how she felt! great job- the emotion was high and left me guessing. Good twist at the end.

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/04/the-visit/#comment-12 Lisa Sat, 05 May 2012 13:19:59 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=30#comment-12 You built fear and anxiety in short order . Well done!

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/03/scars-of-a-rebel-part-2/#comment-11 Summer Ross Fri, 04 May 2012 18:33:01 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=26#comment-11 Great ending! and i liked how tessa came to the rescue!

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/03/scars-of-a-rebel-part-1/#comment-10 Summer Ross Fri, 04 May 2012 18:29:59 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=22#comment-10 Well done- the taunting dialogue was fantastic and you left off in a good ending place that leaves the reader wanting to know more.

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/02/watcher-of-the-skies/#comment-9 Carolyn Paul Branch Thu, 03 May 2012 03:42:31 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=12#comment-9 This seems like a piece of a whole world you have in your head. You’re so lucky to be both an artist and a writer.

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/02/watcher-of-the-skies/#comment-8 Summer Ross Wed, 02 May 2012 02:55:11 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=12#comment-8 I really like how you described her in the beginning- it was well done. I might learn a thing or two about describing characters through your stories. Congrats on completing the first day and I adore the picture you posted with it.

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/05/02/watcher-of-the-skies/#comment-7 Lalage Wed, 02 May 2012 02:52:13 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=12#comment-7 What a gorgeous illustration. I like your descriptions; they’re quite poetic. Congratulations on day 1!

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/04/24/hello-world/#comment-6 Ana Tue, 01 May 2012 08:04:07 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=1#comment-6 Good luck!! I’m in for these rules too!! =)

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/04/24/hello-world/#comment-5 Leslie Tue, 01 May 2012 03:02:36 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=1#comment-5 I really like the idea of leaving your comfort zone genre wise. I think I’m going to give that a try

]]> http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/2012/04/24/hello-world/#comment-4 Amanda Makepeace Mon, 30 Apr 2012 20:13:10 +0000 http://storyaday.org/knightwrite/?p=1#comment-4 Good luck this month!

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