Pride

“And why is it guys can’t go through their drawers without screwing every single thing up in a ball? I don’t know why I bother folding them at all!”

“I’m always after Jack to fold the towels properly. I mean I’m glad that pulls them out the dryer, but he just rolls them and shoves them into the linen closet. I keep telling him: if you fold them in thirds then you can just pull them out and hang them without having to refold them. It doesn’t matter how many times I tell him, he just won’t do it.”

“Guys are pigs.”

“I told Paul if I have to pick up his socks one more time I’m withholding sex.”

Six manicured hands slapped down on the table, their mates clasped to mock-shock O-mouths. Six shoulder-length bobs in various shades from mahogany to peroxide swung first forward and then back as their owners tossed their heads and shrieked with laughter, kohl-rimmed eyes huge. Bruno Mars told the world about his improbable love from an overhead speaker.

Jenn widened her rictus smile by 3mm for a second and a half. She was careful not to let her face fall too far as she relaxed the smile. One free hand wound a long section of her hair into a tight spiral. A section of it caught on a ragged nail. Jenn’s wide eyes and wide eyebrows were caused not by injectable toxins but by the struggle to balance her good manners with her rising urge to glass someone. With some effort she relaxed her grip on the stem of her cocktail glass.

How did I end up here, she wondered as Marcie started in on the tried and true topic of the Interchangeable His’s inability to feed the kids if she hadn’t left him written instructions – or preferably a Tupperware.

Jenn let her head fall back and her eyes, unfocussed, gazed up at the stamped-tin ceiling. But her mind was back in the Serengeti: She and Brendan tracking the hyena pack by it spoor, laughing and flirting and planning for the future. She tried to picture Kimmie and Jen C. and Carole in the melting heat and the dust, picking their way through the desert, picking up poop. She cracked her first genuine smile of the evening.

I’m experiencing some definite Fight or Flight reactions, Jenn noted. Look how still I am, poised, like a gazelle that has just spotted a movement in the long grass.

Another wave of laughter buffeted her. Another plastic-mama mining the comic possibilities of the satorially-challenged male of the species.

But I’m not the gazelle. One eyebrow twitched upward just a hair’s breadth. I’m the lioness. Jenn bared her teeth a little more as Kimmie delivered another killer punchline about the man she had sworn to love and honor. Every muscle was tense. Poised. Ready pounce.

Why do you put up with it? Have you so little self-respect that you chose to marry – or create – an idiot-child and then breed with him? What in the hell are you doing with your one and only life?

She drew in a deep breath, her diaphragm held taut. She felt her vocal muscles tense. The glass stem was smooth and brittle in her fist.

Lips drawn back in a snarl she prepared to throw herself in against the pack, knowing it was suicide to go it alone, but unable to do anything else.

Just as she leaped, she was cursed with a vision of Matthew – her sweet, soft-eyed, brilliant, gentle Matthew. Even if she didn’t need the pack, he did. For now.

“What about you, Jenn?” said a voice from the present.

Jenn snapped to. Twelve sets of eyes locked onto hers.

“Huh?”

“You’re very quiet. Is Brendan any use?”

Jenn thought about Brendan. Whistling while he stacked the dishwasher, bounding down the stairs swinging the baby in a basket of laundry, bringing her coffee, never forgetting to say thanks for the smallest of favours. Brendan, with whom she could argue about politics and religion and talk about the news of the day, and who kept her up to date with the latest news in their field while she, in turned shared the day’s data points about their own little cross-breeding experiment. She thought about her exasperation when he didn’t want talk at the end of a long day; his frustration when he realized she had – yet again – failed to summon up the will to deal with the breakfast dishes before he came home. She smiled as she remembered her increasingly frequent mid-afternoon freak-outs about whether or not they were still ‘in love’.

“Brendan?” she said. Six lions paced, all eyes on her, waiting for her next move. But some of them, she noted, looked a little scrawny, a little ragged around the edges. Vulnerable. Yes, she needed her pack, but sometimes, she reflected, sometimes the lioness reassesses the situation: decides the pride is failing and that it’s safer to go her own way, make her own future. Build a pride of her own. One moment, poised for the attack, the next relaxed, backing up, turning away. Moving towards something new.

Jenn shrugged.

“He’s pretty awesome.” she said into a yawning silence that grew longer and louder. “Really there’s nothing he can’t do. Or won’t.” She added, talking to herself now, rather than the confused pack, circling.

“I chose well.”

The urge to go home pulled at her like a physical force.

“Well ladies, I hate to break up the party, but I really have to get home. I’m sure you’ll manage without me.”

Beaming at the women who had done her such a great service, Jenn drained her glass, stood up and stalked out of the bar, her tail flicking happily at the long grass as she padded towards her future.

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Labyrinth

Inspired by this picture on Flickr.


At the heart of the labyrinth, they used to say, was a minotaur – part man, part bull.

But how could such a rational people ever have believed that, he wondered. How could they have believed such ridiculous stories? They were men of science, men of numbers, like me. I shall simply follow the path where it leads me, no matter how dark. There is, he told himself, no reason for unease.

Yet with each step his breaths grew shallower. Alone in the dark he ran through complex equations in his head to stave off the rising, ridiculous panic.

It worked! The air seemed suddenly less oppressive, the walls around him no longer felt so close. A triumph of mind over matter…

So why was his heart still pounding? And what was that terrible smell?

In the central chamber, a dark shambling figure grunted and shook its taurine head, satisfied for now. It had been a reasonable meal, it thought amiably; perfectly seasoned with sudden fear and just a hint of Euclid.

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Rain Dancing

When the rain started – the warm, blattering summer rain – Ella poked her head out from under her desk and looked out of her window. She cocked her head to one side a little and stared at something far away at the end of the garden, beyond the compost heap and to the right of the shed. After a few moments of staring into the thick darkness of the gloss-green rhododendron leaves she gave a curt nod.

She flew down the stairs as if they were hardly there, all shirred body and billowing skirts in shades of the earth, bare feet skimming over the steps. Down a long dark corridor, across the linoleum patch of kitchen and out of the hand-painted back door before her mother could look up from her Erica Jong. A whisp of cigarette smoke tried to escape after Ella, but she had long since slammed the door shut.

Ella’s mother looked up from her novel and gazed through the french windows. The frown line between her eyes smoothed briefly and then reappeared as she watched her alien child streak down the garden path through the rain, dancing down the steps to the lower terrace, past the vegetable patch and on to the dark purple and green shadows at the end of the garden.

Sheets of warm rain made the distance between them seem further than the physics of their semi-detached universe ought to allow. Then the wind shifted and the window became a river. Ella’s mother turned back to her book.

The first few times Ella had gone ‘rain-dancing’ her mother had tried to stop her. The next few times, after Ella had come back happy and unaccountably clean, she had tried to ask her where she went.

“They’re waiting for me,” Ella had said.

This was in the days before parents knew about the bad men and the strangers lurking behind every bush and so Ella’s mother had not been as concerned as she would be today. Still, she kept a watchful eye on the window and the kitchen door.

 

The shower passed. The sun came out from behind the clouds. The door creaked open.

Laying down her novel and crushing her cigarette in the heavy crystalline ashtray, Ella’s mother untucked her flowing skirt from around her bare feet, stood, and padded through to the kitchen.

Ella was standing in the center of the tiny room, all her weight on one grass-streaked leg – undecided. She looked up at her mother as she walked in. The older girl (wasn’t she still a girl?) felt a smile flood her face. Its warmth reached down towards her chest and she crouched down to take Ella’s cold hand in hers.

“Were they there today?” She asked, pretending she knew what she was talking about.

Ella shrugged and smiled in a dreamy way.

“Is it children from the neighbourhood?” her mother ventured, having, on previous occasions ruled out gypsies, grownups, badgers and slow-worms. Ella shook her head, then stopped to think.

“They are very small,” she said. “But they don’t seem like children.”

Ella’s mother had cocked her head to one side, very much in the way Ella often did and asked,

“Is it imaginary friends that you’re meeting?” but Ella seemed to have forgotten that they had been talking about something and merely blinked at her mother. She was unreachable. Another metal plate slid into place around Ella’s mother’s heart. She pulled herself upright and stared down at the girl. The woman’s lips were a thin, straight line.

“Well, I don’t want you catching cold, going out in the rain like that. For God’s sake put on some boots next time.”

Ella, eyes wide, murmured,

“I can’t catch cold, there. It’s so warm and dry and they always look after me. Silly Mummy.”

But by then, her mother was back in the next room lighting another cigarette and staring at the same page of the same book that she always seemed to be reading.

Ella crept up the stairs trailing behind her a strange tune that never quite came to an end.

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Sailing Away

One foot on the gangplank and she was lighter. She was going home. Astern, a tiny porthole framed a jewel-like Earth. She did not look back.


140 characters.

I’m afraid I’m using up all my time and creativity on running the site (and my family. And my part-time gig at the school). But this is what most people are going through, so I’m not whining. Happy to be turning out even tiny stories at this point.

I vow to Write First from now on.

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The Fixer

The sun beat down on his head and his scalp prickled in the heat. I should get a hat, Tony thought.

He dug his toes deeper into the sand. It was cool and damp down there. He thought of scuttling crabs and other unnamed horrors and pulled his feet up until they rested on the edge of his lounger. Blinking, he looked out at the blue water. A billion tiny mermaids flashed their make-up mirrors back at him, dazzling him. And all because of a dishwasher, he thought, not for the first time.

It had been fifteen years and he still couldn’t believe his luck.

There he had been, twenty-five and his life mapped out. He had the college degree, the wife, the townhouse, and the aspiration to make it to VP by the age of forty. It was, he thought, smiling, as if they had handed him middle-aged spread and lowered expectations along with the diploma at graduation. He had been transplanted from his frat house to a fifties sitcom overnight — and he hadn’t even noticed.

Which might explain how he had found himself unaccountably fuming at the prospect of his young wife waiting in all day  for some dishwasher repair man, and why he’d insisted that he stay home instead that day. Or maybe it had been all the lonely nights watching dubious late night movies alone, after she had turned in at 9:30…

Tony closed his eyes and tried to recognize himself in the upright jerk that lived in his memory.  A cold tentacle unwound itself from its home somewhere in the depths of his belly and began to snake upwards, chilling him.

A shadow fell across him and his eyes snapped open.

The sun was directly behind her, turning her hair into a blazing halo of gold. He couldn’t see her face but he knew it would wear a half-smile and a sleepy-smart expression in her eyes. She held out an already-sweating glass.

Shaking off the past, he laughed — a deep, genuine chuckle. After all these years, the sigh of her still made him feel like a teenager.

“Who the hell are you?” he barked, playing the old game with a grin.

Her head dipped down, still in shadow but he knew the expression she wore.

“I’m Heidi,” she said, low and sweet. “Heidi, your  plumber. I fix things.”

She held  out a hand, businesslike in spite of her white bikini. He grabbed her hand and pulled her down on to he lounger with him.

“Oh honey,” he whispered into her hair. “You certainly did.”

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Some Things Are Best Left Unsaid

i hate it when people find out about my past.

They always look horrified and say,

“I’m so sorry for your loss.”

And what can I say?

“I’m not”?

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A Very Neighbourly Barbecue

CAST:

Mike: a late-twenties, early-thirties professional scientist
Andrea: Mike’s wife. Intelligent, also a professional.
Ted: The party’s host. Early forties. Ex-frat boy. Works in sales.
Bob: Ted’s neighbour and colleague. Has progressed to management.
Carla: Ted’s wife and stay at home mother of their two children, Grace and Teddy Junior
Danni: Bob’s wife. Perpetually frazzled mother of three boys: Aidan, Jacob and Little Bobby.

Scene: A suburban backyard. Two men stand by a huge outdoor range built into a patio made from multi-coloured faux-rustic concrete bricks, stage left. Stage right stand two women, the wives of the BBQ men, and a younger couple. Off-stage to the right, we understand there are children playing in a pool. The wives’ eyes are trained offstage, watching their children play together.
TED: All right, all right, all right! The grill is fired up and we are cookin’! Who’s ready for a world-famous Teddy-Burger?!
[laughter]
[The lighting on the women and younger couple dims, spotlight on the BBQ men. Ted, flouting all known laws of health and safety is shod in flip-flops and holds a long-necked beer bottle in one hand, a spatula in the other. He is also wearing baggy khaki shorts and a Hawaiian shirt. Bob wears navy shorts and a faded polo shirt with some corporate logo over his left nipple. Two cell phones are strapped to his belt.]
Bob: Whatcha got on there Ted? Those some mesquite logs?
Ted: The only way to grill!
Bob: How long you soak them for?
Ted: Oh, bout an hour or so.
[Bob nods approvingly]
Ted: We’ve got the beer!
Bob: Yeah!
Ted: We’ve got the mesquite!
Bob: Woooo!
Ted: I’ve got my Memorial Day party shirt on!
Bob: Oh yeah!
Ted: Let’s get grillin ‘
Bob: Go Teddy, Go Teddy, it’s you birthday! Go Teddy!

[Light fades. Spotlight on the other group, stage right]
Carla: …just be glad yours are all out of diapers at last. Teddy Junior is still having poop problems. I’ll have to keep an eye on him in the pool there. [shouts] Gracey! Keep an eye on your brother!
Danni: I’ll just be glad when I don’t have to wipe anyone’s hiney any more. I am so over wiping people’s tushies. When we get old, Bob can hire himself a 21 year old Scandanavian girl to do it for him, I don’t care!
[They laugh]
Carla: Oh, we’re scaring the newly-weds. I’m sorry, guys, but when you’re a mom poop is just part of the everyday conversation, right Danni?
Danni: I can’t even remember when it wasn’t! Well, you’ll understand when you have kids. [shouts offstage] Aidan! Do not push your brother’s head under the water.
Carla[gasps]: Grace Amelia! We do not do that in other people’s pools!

[Both mothers rush off, stage right, to attend to their progeny. Mike and Andrea watch them go.]

Andrea: Soooo….do I have to go back on the pill?
[Mike appears to be considering this carefully for a moment.]
Mike: We don’t HAVE to turn into…”this”, do we?
Andrewa [laughs]: I don’t think it’s mandatory, no.
[Mike, weighing his options, stares up at the sky. he opens his mouth to talk, then, distracted, frowns peering into the distance, downstage]
Mike: What’s that?
Andrea[looking]: What?
[Carla and Danni bustle back into the scene] Mike waves his bottle at Andrea and nods to her wine glass. She hands it too him a little too quickly, which makes him smile. They share a moment, then Mike turns and walks towards the grill, stage right]
[The spotlight follows Mike. The lights on the women dim. The lights on the men go up]
Ted: Mike! You can help us with this!
[Mike, caught, looks up, puts his drinks down on the table and wanders over.
Bob: Ted here is saying that I shoul dhae put down seed on the lawn this spring at the same time as the fertilizer, but I'm saying ti s got to be six weeks before. Now, you're a scientist, right? You settle it for us.
Mike [nonplussed]: Well, i’m more in the human cell biology line, myself, but…I thought Fall was the best time to plant greass seed.
Ted[roaring with laughter]: Fall? Fall? But I want my grass to look good NOW, Mikey-boy!
Bob: What the hell good is a green lawn in Fall? It’s just gonna get covered in leaves. no, no, no MIke. I guess you scientists aren’t as smart as you’re cracked up to be!
[Both men laugh]
Ted: Yeah, how the hell we gonna trust you on that climate change thing if you don’t even know when to plant grass?
Bob: And what’s up with Pluto not being a planet any more? Can’t you make your minds up on that, either?
[Bob and Ted are cracking each other up, bending over, clutching their knees, slapping each other on the back.
Bob: Ah, we're just kidding around with you, Mike. Zing!
Ted: Hooo boy!
Mike [in a "Kill Me!" voice]: You got me.

[Mike forces a smile and then turns away to check on Andrea. As he turns downstage, his motion is arrested and he stares into the sky, eyes wide]
Mike: What the…?
[He looks back at the other men, but they are still hooting and hollering and slapping each other on the back]
Mike: Andrea!
[The lights go up on both halves of the stage. The wind picks up. Andrea looks where Mike is looking. Stares. The other adults glance up, glaze over, start talking again. We hear the occasional phrase]
Carla: …yeast infection from hell….
Danni: …diaper rash…
Ted: 3.7% return, for God’s sake….
Danni: …OOOZING!
Bob: …batting 2.4 again….
Ted: …total BS…

[Andrea and Mike move downstage but stay near their gender groups]

Mike: What in the hell?
Andrea: Is that…?
[They grab their cell phones and start checking the news. Mike takes a picture]
Mike: Dre, tell me I’m not imagining that, um, spaceship?
Andrea [giggles, near hysteria]: Um no, You’re not imagining the space ship!
[they turn to their neighbours]
Andrea: Do you SEE that?!
Mike: Guys, do you see…

[The neighbors turn and look, vaguely]
Carla [mildly]: What is that? Some new boy toy?
Danni [snorts]: Looks like a flying Honda Element. They are so boxy. I can’t imaging how anyone could drive around in one of those things.
Carla [distracted] Grace! How many times….? [exit]
Danni: It sure is kicking up some wind though. What a mess. Here…
[She begins to collect paper plates and napkins that are beign blown around]

A&M stare at each other in disbelief.
Mike: Ted! Bob! There is a UFO hovering over the end of your garden!
Ted [turning to look]: Jesus! [turns back to the grill and grabs the lid] It’s going to blow dirt all over my Teddy-burgers! [He turns back to yell] Shut your engine off, you moron!
Bob: I never seen anything like that in my life.
[Mike turns towards him, hopeful]
Bob: I was thinking about getting me an ultralight, Ted., you know like Peterman has? But the cost of gas for one of those…[turns back to the UFO] What do you reckon that thing’d cost to run?
[Ted and Bob huddle, discussing the cost of gas. Snatches of their conversation can be heard as Mike and Andrea stare, check their cell phones, stare some more.
Ted: ...Dad's Oldsmobile....ten dollars the entire year.
Bob: ...miss my Beretta, but hell....

[Carla clucks back on stage, glances at Mike and Andrea, and pointedly begins helping Danni collect the strewn paper plates and napkins]

[Mike and Andrea come together as the wind picks up. They hold hands. They duck, suddenly, protectively.
Mike [screaming]: It’s coming down!
[The wind is stronger now. All six people stagger a little as the spaceship lands. They stare as if woken from a trance.]
Ted: My God!
Bob: What in the…
Dannie: Oh my Lord!
Carla: Oh my God! The azaleas! That thing has ruined my azaleas!
[Everyone looks at Carla who is still staring off into the distance, downstage. The BBQ guys look from side to side of the craft, assessing the size and damage. Their expressions are bland.]
Bob: That’s gonna leave a pretty good sized hole, Teddy. Did it nick your fence?
Ted: If my insurance doesn’t cover that I’m giving Huber hell on Tuesday.
Danni [laughing]: Well, Ted, you always did want to put in a pool down there where Carla’s prized azaleas were! I guess now you can!

[All four laugh and begin chattering again. The lights dim. Spotlight on Andrea and Mike]

Mike [ excited]: it’s a real UFO!
Andrea [checking her phone]: They’re everywhere!
Mike: This is so awesome. Oh man. Real. Live. Aliens!
Andrea: It’s opening up!
Mike [giddily]: We could learn so much from them: engineering, medicine! I could be out of a job! But who cares? Real, live aliens! Klatu Barada Nikto, baby!
[Mike punches the air with one arm, grinning]
Andrea [checking her phone again]: There’s a huge one downtown. Oh no! It crushed the baseball stadium!
Ted [still dimly-lit]: Sheeeee-it!
Bob; Man, that is really gonna kill the home field advantage if we make it to the playoffs this year!
[Mike blinks hard and shakes his head to clear it. Andrea checks her phone. Gasps]
Andrea: No! Oh God, no!
Mike:What? Andrea, what?
Andrea [lays a hand on Mike's forearm]: They’ve…they’ve destroyed the White House. Fired on it. It’s …. gone.

[They stare at each other in fear. They look towards their UFO with its slowly opening hatch - unseen, somewhere behind the audience]

Mike: We have to go.

[Andrea nods]

[They look back at the men laughing over the grill, the women running around, chicken-like, gathering napkins.]

Mike: We can’t help them
Andrea [slowly]: I know.
Mike: [slugging the last of his beer]: We have to go now!
Andrea; I know

[They take each others' hands and begin to run off stage left. Andrea stops. Pulling Mike almost off his feet]

Andrea: The kids!

[She and Mike look ffstage, stage right. Mike looks at the parents]

Mike: I’m not sure we can save those kids.

[Andrea looks at the parents.]

Andrea. I know. But we have to try, Mike. For the good of humanity, we have to try.

[Mike nods grimly. Mike and Andrea, bent protectively and casting wary glances downstage, run off, stage right, still holding hands]

[The lights come up gradually on the neighbors. One by one they notice someone advancing, uninvited on their holiday barbecue. One by one, they stop chattering and stand, smiling uncertainly until all are facing downstage, caught in a harsh white light. Ted holds his spatula like a flag of truce.

Carla: [perkily, yet a little frosty]: Well. Hi there!

FREEZE

BLACK


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On The Deck

Deck picture

Photo by: ConanTheLibrarian

It is so peaceful out here on the deck. Just a simple rectangle mounted onto the back of a suburban box.

A mature maple shades the whole thing at this time of day, but lets enough daylight through that Denton can see patterns dappling his legs, his dark pants, when he looks down.

He rests one hand on the brown, stained railing. It is rough under his skin. He runs the pad of his middle finger gently back and forward, lightly twanging the spur of splintering wood and listens to the sound it makes. How far would it bend before it broke? You never can tell, he thinks.

Peaceful, but not quiet, out here. Really it’s a wall of sound, if a glass one. Strata of bird song fill it, for one thing, from the chirping sparrows close by to the trilling cardinals somewhere in the middle distance and a far-off dove coo-coo-cooing. Planes circle overhead, marking this place as within 45 minutes’ drive of a major airport; close enough for a quick getaway, but not so close that the engine’s roar would rattle the windows.

Delivery trucks and landscapers’ pickup trucks are the occasional engines he hears in the neighborhood; further out, the rise and fall of traffic on the edges of a small town.

A mother’s raised voice from an open window somewhere on his left. Chiding her child, as if it understood the weariness, the sacrifice and the frustration behind the repeated plea to “Just do it, alright?”

A car door closes. More voices behind the birdsong. Too early yet for cicadas. Denton wonders who will be listening to the cicadas from this deck, come August.

He takes a deep breath of the warm clean air, and tries to carry the birdsong and the dappled light with him as he turns and opens the door, stepping back into the crime scene.

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Struggling on

Eating badly, sleeping badly, unable to think straight or plan for my daily commitments. I get all messed up in the head sometimes.

But this month i have noticed that if i sit down to write as soon as I can (which in my case is usually once I have kicked everyone out of the house with lunches and homework and pecks on the cheek – or whichever reluctant body part I can reach), my whole day goes better.

Even if i don’t write my story first thing, if i write in my journal before i check email or Facebook or twitter or read a book or stack the dishwasher or do any of the thousand little things that suck me in, my whole day runs more smoothly. I’m calmer, more focused and stand a much better chance of getting to the things that are important rather thn drifting in a sea of competing distractions.

And if i carve out time, before the return of the chattering classes, to make a good start on a story idea, then I am almost guaranteed to chew over it -instead of avoidance strategies- while i do the housework or the preschool run, or AOTTLTTSMI…in fact, i end up wanting to fold laundry and unload the dishwasher so i can ponder how to get character A together with character B at point Z.

I was in danger of going out of my mind a little this morning, so I said to hell with the everyday obligations, and took myself, my coffee and my notebook outside and wrote. I had no idea what to write so i wrote about where i was. And it turned into something.

Pen to paper. That’s how i am writing a story a day.

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Motherfrakked

“I’m sorry, not today. No”

And just like that he’s down.

It’s like all the bones in his legs melt and he collapses to the floor. His little arms are raised high above his head, which is thrown back in a silent scream. Not silent for long, of course.

The rest of his body hits the linoleum. The cool floor must feel nice on his forehead, I think; briefly; envious. Tiny fists pound the shiny surface, one hitting a dark square, the other slamming an off-white one.

I take a breath. Size up my options. Turn to check the cart and, oh! Heart jumps in chest. Where is …? But there he is: five year old legs pumping, carrying my ‘big boy’ towards the dratted automatic front doors that slide open onto a crosswalk that no-one ever slows down for.

How do you choose between your children? Oo, oo! I know this one: You choose the one whose life is in most imminent danger. You leave behind the one who might possibly survive until you get back. Repeat to fade. I glance at the grey-haired lady behind me in line. I glance at the screaming bundle of my DNA on the ground (I’m so proud). She nods a tiny nod and I turn and dash for the door. I think I see her smirk.

If anything’s going to kill them, I pray as I dash towards the door, let it be old age. Or me. No, I mean “old age”. Definitely not some stranger who’s in too much of a hurry to get to Costco to slow down for my child on the busy crosswalk.

I grab his arm as his first foot breaks the plane of the front door. He swings around, almost flying. Wheeee! We could be in the living room at home, swinging around and around, feet off the ground, gasping with pleasure and laughter. But we’re not.

I frog-march him back to the checkout, wrestle him back into the cart, pick up the sobbing bundle of Three and tuck him, legs flailing under my arm. I never knew I had such strength. I am incoherent with rage. I don’t remember paying the cashier or getting back to the car. I’m pretty sure that if any one hurriedly drove through that crosswalk in their two-ton death-mobile, they were repelled by the powerful force-field of my anger, alone.

On the road -somehow they are strapped in- and everyone in the back is crying. I roll up to a four-way stop sign. The car in front of me goes, then the one to my right, his right, his right until the dance comes back to me. I pull forward to the line, tap my brakes -a vehicular curtsey- and lead off. A moment later and there are blue lights in my rear view. Where did you come from? Can I pull over here and get out of your way? Yes, it’s safe.

But he’s not roaring past me. He is stopping behind me. What in the…

I’m not sure yet if it is adrenaline or a cop’s mind games that make it seem like several scream-filled minutes pass before he saunters up to my window. Fifteen minutes later I’m sure it’s all him. I’m also sure that he has no children, that he has a quota to fill and that he is ambitious. I think he thinks he has a sense of humor as he tells me I can challenge the citation by going to court.

Hating him all the rest of the way home deflects my anger from the two tiny, crumpled boys in my mirror, who have fallen asleep right as I pull into the driveway.

My strength deserts me. I poke the car’s nose into the garage but leave the door open. I crack the car windows and recline my chair. The next moment, I am flying above town, through a clear blue sky, a boy holding on to each hand. We are laughing, tumbling through the cool air; each of us keeping the others from from falling.

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