Today’s prompt is a little different. It’s going to show you just how much difference Point of View can made.
Rewrite A Story From A Different Perspective
Take a story that you have written (either this month or at some other point) and rewrite it from a different point of view. If it was third person, limited, try making it first person, or third person omniscient. What new avenues of empathy does that open up for you? What new language can you use (see this article for useful examples).
You can choose to rewrite someone else’s story for this exercise (as long as you promise not to try to get it published and get yourself — and me — for breach of copyright for producing unauthorized derivative works) but it’s better to try this with one of your own. I’m not actually terribly worried about us getting sued. It’s just that rewriting one of your own will show you just how much the same story, written from a different point of view, changes even when written by the same person.
I strongly suggest choosing a story you are already happy with, for this exercise. If you already love the story, you’re much more likely to enjoy playing with it from a different point of view. Or you might hate doing it, but remember: you’re not deleting anything. You’re just doing an exercise.
Go!
I rewrote an old piece from 3rd into 1st person. Entertaining, but I think it worked better as third.
I love second person – when done well. It seems to work best in flash.
I went with second-person (http://morgenbailey.wordpress.com/2012/05/25/story-a-day-may-2012-may-25th-one-out-of-three) let me know if you think it’s a choose your own. 🙂
I don’t think I can do second well. I tried once and it sounded more like first POV talking to someone. LOL
I know, I know, its just so hard to pull off without sounding like a Choose Your Own Adventure. I can add it in, thought, if people want…
what about poor underrated, undervalued, underloved second person 🙁