Day 14 | Mine Your Memories for Emotions by Julie Duffy

The Prompt

Today you’re going to dig into your memories and find one that has emotional resonance.

(Tip: it’s easy to reach for a dark memory, because those have strong emotions attached to them, but don’t be afraid to dig around for moments of joy, surprise, and happiness too. Happy stories can be deep, too!)

Put your characters into a scenario where they will feel similarly strong emotions. Then tell us that story, but practice doing it without ever naming an emotion.

Show us how they feel in their bodies, in what they notice, in any way you can. Make the scenery reflect their mood, if you want! Just don’t name the emotions.

This is excellent practice for any time you want readers to linger in the moment with your characters, or any time you want to highlight that This Is An Important Moment!

If you want more practice with the this technique, check out the One Story Challenge – Show, Don’t Tell Edition


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Julie Duffy

Julie Duffy is a writer and the host of StoryADay. She has been working with authors since 1998 and has run the StoryADay Superstars writing group since 2018. Browse some of her on-demand workshops and workshops, or sign up for a coaching session, here:


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