Day 27 | The Mystery of Pain by Neha Mediratta

The Prompt

“It hurts,” she points yet again to her foot. Her heel. The very back of her heel to be precise. “Why does it hurt?”

I’m a doctor who has run every test I know, prescribed every exercise I know. Yet the pain persists.

I ask her again, hoping for a different answer, “Why Does it hurt? Are you sure you didn’t just bang it somewhere, against something?”

She shakes her head

I lean on my desk looking her in the eyes, “All the blood-work is fine. The results are actually neat, the way the values line up. It’s almost too good to be true. So why Does it hurt?”


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Neha Mediratta

Neha Mediratta Chaudhuri is an independent writer, editor and consultant based in Mumbai. Recently, her award-winning sci-fi story Body Count was encoded in a Nickel and Gold Nano-fiche and sent to the moon (See Lunar Codex Project).

You can find her latest short story collection Death Chips and Love Fries at Amazon.

Meet her here: www.nehamediratta.com.


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