Character Speech

Today’s Tiny Task in preparation for StoryADay May is to

List 5 expressions people in your life overuse

While you’re capturing the phrase, capture the meaning behind the phrase, the culture it comes from, the ways it which is irritates/delights you and how those feelings manifest, physically in you.

Discussion

Pick one of the expressions to share here

Personality Traits

Today’s Tiny Task to prepare for StoryADay is to

Make a list of 5 or more personality traits that drive you absolutely crazy

This exercise is slightly different from the other character brainstorming we’ve done this week, because it’s not so much about an internal or external feature, but more about the actions a person takes, without thinking.

I’m asking you to list traits that drive you up the wall, because accessing strong emotions is a good way to make sure that you put conflict and emotion into your story.

You don’t have to write a miserable story just because you include a personality trait that drives you batty. You can use this trait as a starting point for a character who is going to be reformed, or as comic relief, or as a cautionary tale.

Bonus points: list 3 ways each trait could be subverted, changed, used for comic relief, or otherwise turned around.

Discussion

Are you keeping all your notes during these prep-sessions, in a place where you’ll easily be able to access them during the challenge? Share your ‘system’ (such as it is) here, to inspire/warn others. Then, if you haven’t thought it through yet, pick a place (physical or digital) to store all your notes, and then write yourself a big, physical sticky note to remind yourself you did it. Leave a comment to let us know you’ve done it!

Something To Hold Onto

Today’s Tiny Task in preparation for StoryADay May is:

Make a list of 10 accessories/physical features you can give your characters.

In a short story it’s important to orient the reader quickly. You don’t want them stopping to remember which character is which.

With main characters you can spend time working on the way they speak, think and act, to make sure that they feel unique.

But you can also ‘cheat’ by giving them (or walk-on/secondary characters) one signature item that lets readers identify them quickly:

e.g: the barrista in Friends with the shock of white-blond hair; The Doctor in Doctor Who‘s extravagantly long-flappy coat (in almost every regeneration!); Columbo’s raincoat; Aragorn’s sword; Captain America’s shield; the red coat worn by a little girl in the otherwise black-and-white Schindler’s List; the Narnia children’s gifts from Aslan…

Note: with an object there is also the narrative possibility of letting the reader know something is very wrong, if we show the item, with the character nowhere nearby…

DISCUSSION

Did you choose a mix of items and distinctive physical features?

Brainstorming Characters Pt 2

Today’s Tiny Task in preparation for StoryADay May is to expand your pool of available characters in a different direction.

Make a list of characters who are unlike you in specific ways.

  • External features: External features: race, gender, socioeconomic status, job title, role at your work, role in your family, height, weight, athletic ability, hair color…
  • Internal features: how your character reacts to stress; how they talk to people; their attitude to people who are different from them; their level of courage and fear (not the same things!); their ability to control their emotions; what they would define as a ‘good’ outcome in any situation…

It can help to think of specific people who are very unlike you–whether you admire or despise aspects of their behavior–and make a list of the actions they take, the words they say, the body language they employ, that help you understand how they are different from you (remember that, in storytelling, showing how characters act can be more powerful than simply giving us the narrator/protagonist’s opinions).

Further reading: a writing prompt

Discussion

Are you excited to write about characters who are not like you? Were you able to identify aspects of specific people that are different from you? What kinds of roles will these characters take in a story? (Will they always be the antagonist/bad guy, or did you list some features you admire, too?

Brainstorming Characters Pt 1

Today’s Tiny Task in preparation for StoryADay May is to gather a cast of character you can audition for stories, when an ideas strikes you.

The prompts are great, but it’s going to be up to you to find characters to make them come alive. Remember:

Plot happens outside, but story happens inside

-Donald Maass, The Emotional Craft of Fiction

Create a list of five characters who are quite like you (this makes it easy to write about them quickly, since you only have to look inside for the ‘research’).

Ways they might be like you:

  • External features: race, gender, socioeconomic status, job title, role at your work, role in your family, height, weight, athletic ability, hair color…
  • Internal aspects: introversion/extraversion; math ability; reaction to stressful situations; likelihood you’ll stand up for someone in an argument; self-control; preferences for what you like to do in your free time; feelings about people who are different from you; willingness to ‘fit in’ in society…

Bonus points: make a list of ways those things about you a, frustrate and b, delight you. Think about how you might use that to create internal and external conflict, in a story.

Further Reading: Creating Compelling Characters

Discussion

Was it fun to think about writing a character that shares things in common with you? Or did you roll your eyes (do it anyway! It might save you on a day when the writing isn’t coming easily!)

Writing Prompt – Under The Weather

Today’s Story Spark/Writing Prompt is an example of how you can use events from your real life (I was really under the weather, as you can hear).

There are lots of events we’d rather not live through in our lives. Why not exorcise the demons, by inflicting them on our characters.

Things going to easily for your character, as they scale the rockface to rescue the kitten? Make them do it while battling a nasty head cold! Boss cut back your hours? Throw the same challenge at your protagonist and let them act out your wildest revenge fantasies or let them be the best, most resourceful version that you hope you will be. Inspire yourself!

Keep writing!