I was blogging and podcasting a lot, last month, about short story forms, and how short stories do not have to read like mini novels.
And the month before that was all about Flash Fiction.
Today, I’m recommending that you take a look at this story Paradox, by Naomi Kritzer.
It is both flash fiction and a non-narrative story. And it’s great.
This is the original timeline.
This is a great example of how you can make every word count, and how short fiction is a wonderful place to practice that.
That single word, “original” does all the heavy lifting. It tells you a lot about what kind of story this is going to be: confusing, time-travel-y, chatty. It conveys genre, style, and tone.
Five words. That’s all it took her to set the reader’s expectations.
(Note to self: write to the author and ask her what the original first line looked like. I’m betting it wasn’t this. Second note to self: rewriting is key!)
It is written in the first person (sometimes first person, plural) and we never find out the character’s name or gender. It plays deliciously, hilariously, with all the time travel tropes and questions out there, and talks, knowingly, to the reader.
This is no mini-novel.
And it leaves us with a flippant question at the end, the deeper question it asks is not about time-travel at all.
Read it online or listen here.